tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post2664617071596119793..comments2023-10-24T10:51:02.051+02:00Comments on Writer's Notebook: Secret unlockedPaulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02515440663113132433noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-26747167304086877982007-08-21T19:35:00.000+02:002007-08-21T19:35:00.000+02:00I don't need to say I am a chocoholic, after all d...I don't need to say I am a chocoholic, after all dark chocolate is now deemed good for us. (I love surprise endings.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-51658639614485666812007-08-18T17:31:00.000+02:002007-08-18T17:31:00.000+02:00I like this FF. It worked for me if I considered t...I like this FF. It worked for me if I considered the theme and assumed that all of his mothers bad days where color coded cryptic messages. What was revealed in this neww journal was how depressed his Mother had become in her final days. This maybe not your intention but it really works if I take the word chocoholic to mean suicidal. This would be a key that Joe must bury.Jack Greeninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04757436266215791856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-63661057128772733962007-08-18T06:57:00.000+02:002007-08-18T06:57:00.000+02:00Smile at the end with the mystery setup and the gr...Smile at the end with the mystery setup and the groaner of a finish. I don't even know what to say. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-15773908158047430232007-08-18T02:42:00.000+02:002007-08-18T02:42:00.000+02:00I agree. What's so bad about being a chocoholic. ...I agree. What's so bad about being a chocoholic. I'm sure you'll get asked the same by a lot of women who just looooovveee chocolates. It's good to know that the mother has her own comfort in that rich drink that everyone loves. I think that she might have started to use it to give her comfort when things are bad. But started to crave it more and more until it has become too difficult to resist. As it is in real life. =)Therhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00032674476317023443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-11207763496165019752007-08-17T22:43:00.000+02:002007-08-17T22:43:00.000+02:00A fine FF. I like the mysterious tone.A fine FF. I like the mysterious tone.Dale Challener Roehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04605721172822135196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-22184988893284040422007-08-17T18:51:00.000+02:002007-08-17T18:51:00.000+02:00Excellently delivered!! And I'm in concurrence wi...Excellently delivered!! <BR/><BR/>And I'm in concurrence with Beth...we're supposed to HIDE that fact? Oh crap...I'm in trouble.<BR/><BR/>Cheers,<BR/>Jenjenihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04510876745659994876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-76193730021123277182007-08-17T18:08:00.000+02:002007-08-17T18:08:00.000+02:00I love bitter chocolates and proud to admit it..:)...I love bitter chocolates and proud to admit it..:)gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-12135323058721861532007-08-17T14:35:00.000+02:002007-08-17T14:35:00.000+02:00Maybe, it's just the son who has a problem with th...Maybe, it's just the son who has a problem with this?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-49889860860771648322007-08-17T14:06:00.000+02:002007-08-17T14:06:00.000+02:00i say bully for mother,, she had something that ma...i say bully for mother,, she had something that made her happy... i am happy for her....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-77288940873129730002007-08-17T13:59:00.000+02:002007-08-17T13:59:00.000+02:00If we go by the theme, we can assume the mom must ...If we go by the theme, we can assume the mom must have had a lot of bad days. Is this why the son has to hide her chocolate addiction, because it could be a reflection of how unhappy she was despite their presence in her life? It's a sad story, still it's full of love.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-28755803963615669462007-08-17T13:42:00.000+02:002007-08-17T13:42:00.000+02:00Uhoh...are we supposed to hide that fact that we'r...Uhoh...are we supposed to hide that fact that we're chocoholics? :)<BR/><BR/>Great job - I like the mystery that it leaves me with (WHY was it so bad that she liked chocolate?)bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07410141302890616932noreply@blogger.com