tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post4678786712534765678..comments2023-10-24T10:51:02.051+02:00Comments on Writer's Notebook: BetrayalPaulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02515440663113132433noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-75410000443349136802007-09-27T23:05:00.000+02:002007-09-27T23:05:00.000+02:00Another captivating entry, Paul. These stories se...Another captivating entry, Paul. These stories seem to go by so quickly. <BR/><BR/>I did not forsee Gerard turning his back on Simon. Nice twist. And now he has been offered a job, so he can stay, and the story can continue :)Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-63626473084198920812007-09-27T17:47:00.000+02:002007-09-27T17:47:00.000+02:00You manage as always to hold our interest. Totally...You manage as always to hold our interest. Totally engrossed!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-5819674767489827072007-09-27T07:33:00.000+02:002007-09-27T07:33:00.000+02:00Paul,I have been following your blog from long tim...Paul,<BR/>I have been following your blog from long time, but never left any comment. Now I feel, it is rude of me, if i don't do it now. All your posts are very very creative and interesting. Write on.2lchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04999683476547369244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-54972076107482119022007-09-27T04:57:00.000+02:002007-09-27T04:57:00.000+02:00With friends like Gerard, who needs enemies?With friends like Gerard, who needs enemies?TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-84882981998330547312007-09-27T03:15:00.000+02:002007-09-27T03:15:00.000+02:00what an extraordinary turn of events... on both co...what an extraordinary turn of events... on both counts... i hope he stays and gives that mayor and his god awful son the once over when he gets rooted!!!!!!paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-34120426079078433672007-09-26T22:08:00.000+02:002007-09-26T22:08:00.000+02:00I enjoyed reading this very much! It was very int...I enjoyed reading this very much! It was very intriguing - I want to know what happens next. (And I haven't read the earlier story, so now I need to go back and read that one,too.) Nice work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-20703118784346203722007-09-26T21:28:00.000+02:002007-09-26T21:28:00.000+02:00I await the next episode.I await the next episode.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-4345509893739289052007-09-26T21:22:00.000+02:002007-09-26T21:22:00.000+02:00Definitely adept at getting the reader interested....Definitely adept at getting the reader interested. Esp. as I had not read the earlier pieces. Very nicely crafted.<BR/><BR/>~SShephardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07318615370914088651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-5929289352341814182007-09-26T20:53:00.000+02:002007-09-26T20:53:00.000+02:00You're adept at pulling the reader in and holding ...You're adept at pulling the reader in and holding his interest!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-6823316589703489422007-09-26T20:14:00.000+02:002007-09-26T20:14:00.000+02:00Interesting tale and use of the three words. This ...Interesting tale and use of the three words. This was my favorite line<BR/><BR/>David had become a cowering soldier and Goliath resumed his blasphemous mocking from across the impenetrable divide.RomanceWriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14920489469191764147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-7276212250500267852007-09-26T19:44:00.000+02:002007-09-26T19:44:00.000+02:00poor guy! btw: the post caught my interest so wel...poor guy! btw: the post caught my interest so well that I had to go back and actually search for the TWW words. :o)Charlotta-lovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17694362692847403727noreply@blogger.com