tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post4943742999069496152..comments2023-10-24T10:51:02.051+02:00Comments on Writer's Notebook: On the RoadPaulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02515440663113132433noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-47921196522325881892007-12-29T02:23:00.000+01:002007-12-29T02:23:00.000+01:00I love the idea of him and daisy sitting in the mi...I love the idea of him and daisy sitting in the middle of nowhere, around, around camp fire, duelling guitars, or perhaps making love through their guitars?<BR/><BR/>Tightly written ... and was wondering about the time setting - as he bought her steam boat tickets?<BR/><BR/>Both you and I write about a guitar being the catalyst for freedom. I wonder what it is about the guitar that seems to be metaphor for freedom? Also - apologies for mixing up you and the other Paul - d'oh! Hope your health and work situations are improving.Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-68335743157136456142007-12-28T22:13:00.000+01:002007-12-28T22:13:00.000+01:00I cannot imagine living life on the road. Too inse...I cannot imagine living life on the road. Too insecure for me!!<BR/><BR/>This was a very good piece. You've explained the whole background very readily without it being too dry. and the present opening was very sweet!<BR/><BR/>(*)>birdwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03430027415614308875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-37525346325146913972007-12-28T20:29:00.000+01:002007-12-28T20:29:00.000+01:00Sweet. I got a little confused about who was open...Sweet. I got a little confused about who was opening what and which parcels were being moved where at the end, but this was a nice, romantic episode to begin a new journey.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-1717750390788184732007-12-28T16:25:00.000+01:002007-12-28T16:25:00.000+01:00I really liked this. Of course living life on the ...I really liked this. Of course living life on the road is dream my husband aspire to as a retirement project. I don't know how we'll do it, but it is what we want to do oce the kids are grown and on their own. The guitars sounded so lovely. You pulled off a perfectly romantic story without it making it incredibly sappy. Well done.Square1https://www.blogger.com/profile/13559171378908608414noreply@blogger.com