tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post6902946906877579707..comments2023-10-24T10:51:02.051+02:00Comments on Writer's Notebook: Shopping For WordsPaulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02515440663113132433noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-85063321937524135922009-10-23T00:14:17.312+02:002009-10-23T00:14:17.312+02:00Hi Paul
I loved the concept of heartache being an ...Hi Paul<br />I loved the concept of heartache being an entity in and of itself. <br /><br />I have to admit I got a little lost at the end: heartache slipped into the guy's head, yet all of a sudden things were happening (being re-lived) "live"? <br /><br />Despite my confusion, I have to say I enjoyed this fresh unique perspective. Well done!~willow~http://noweepingallowed.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-41496352884519567712009-10-22T16:14:34.311+02:002009-10-22T16:14:34.311+02:00delightful tale, I like the perspective of Heartac...delightful tale, I like the perspective of Heartache, he is almost like the devil with his childish charmslissahttp://www.justwritingwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-86961373974326870212009-10-22T05:25:52.948+02:002009-10-22T05:25:52.948+02:00excellent!excellent!Pblacksawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16959380392842211295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-6939070653795700432009-10-22T05:25:18.518+02:002009-10-22T05:25:18.518+02:00That was an interesting characterization of hearta...That was an interesting characterization of heartache! :)<br /><br />Heartache and his prey! nice take!Anya Padyamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-37901075864094093112009-10-22T05:24:55.535+02:002009-10-22T05:24:55.535+02:00Very creative ~ a great read!Very creative ~ a great read!Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-39197852627314004662009-10-22T00:40:39.292+02:002009-10-22T00:40:39.292+02:00I loved the voice of heartache seeking it's pr...I loved the voice of heartache seeking it's prey. Good.<br /><br />b<br /><br />http://torristravels.blogspot.com/2009/10/habit-of-thinking.htmlbhttp://torristravels.blogpsot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-25433956629823567632009-10-22T00:28:59.454+02:002009-10-22T00:28:59.454+02:00An interesting concept. I approve :)An interesting concept. I approve :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-80325636897404055832009-10-22T00:11:14.415+02:002009-10-22T00:11:14.415+02:00For sure, a clever tale! Enjoyed the read.For sure, a clever tale! Enjoyed the read.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-59193281592750638262009-10-21T20:56:21.938+02:002009-10-21T20:56:21.938+02:00This was so clever! A very unique take on this pro...This was so clever! A very unique take on this prompt. Great read! :~)Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-87007612693556186452009-10-21T18:07:23.573+02:002009-10-21T18:07:23.573+02:00I truly enjoyed reading this - very creative - hea...I truly enjoyed reading this - very creative - heartache is always just around the corner, waiting for an opportunity to pounce on our weaknesses.Crickethttp://cricket51.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-47888109817545361152009-10-21T14:28:07.090+02:002009-10-21T14:28:07.090+02:00This was indeed a pleasure to read .. and somehow ...This was indeed a pleasure to read .. and somehow its so very true .. it just need a moment for heartache to capture your thoughts and body !PS the Pratsiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03244361418371176194noreply@blogger.com