tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post8091180906503720752..comments2023-10-24T10:51:02.051+02:00Comments on Writer's Notebook: UnsuspectingPaulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02515440663113132433noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-68019524214390069442010-05-28T20:07:07.413+02:002010-05-28T20:07:07.413+02:00Very original predicament, and you kept me hooked....Very original predicament, and you kept me hooked. Thanks for the good read!Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-23922708070514979322010-05-28T15:06:46.602+02:002010-05-28T15:06:46.602+02:00You brought everything together at the end wonderf...You brought everything together at the end wonderfully. Did not see it coming at all.Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-11128965332141695142010-05-28T03:48:03.071+02:002010-05-28T03:48:03.071+02:00Great twist and wonderful flash fiction.
undefine...Great twist and wonderful flash fiction.<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/05/undefined-paths.html" rel="nofollow">undefined paths</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-89158948130574302882010-05-27T17:16:38.924+02:002010-05-27T17:16:38.924+02:00I enjoyed reading your flash fiction. The twist a...I enjoyed reading your flash fiction. The twist at the end with the untouched second drink came together well for me. <br /><br />-TimTimothy P. Remphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04422296532550497806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-48036648804702126762010-05-27T09:25:13.189+02:002010-05-27T09:25:13.189+02:00nicely done. i too had to reread it probably becau...nicely done. i too had to reread it probably because i didn't quite see that twist coming. had to make sure i got it right.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-20450788802453261792010-05-27T07:29:14.098+02:002010-05-27T07:29:14.098+02:00Good read. I read the end first...I always do tha...Good read. I read the end first...I always do that. But in this case I had to go back and read the whole thing. <br /><br />bb+ (Retire In Style Blog)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05114209481329773753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-67978139890619943022010-05-27T03:21:03.841+02:002010-05-27T03:21:03.841+02:00Yeah, clever stuff!I had to read this a few times ...Yeah, clever stuff!I had to read this a few times to make sure I got the relationships right. Nicely told!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-30521360081514781702010-05-27T01:43:28.631+02:002010-05-27T01:43:28.631+02:00What great twist! The best twists are the one'...What great twist! The best twists are the one's you sort of see coming, but are still surprised when they hit you.Denise Moncriefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06793221574604284282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-61361507819859376292010-05-26T22:44:06.066+02:002010-05-26T22:44:06.066+02:00Oops... What a great twist!Oops... What a great twist!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-22252236199859921032010-05-26T22:17:23.720+02:002010-05-26T22:17:23.720+02:00What a wonderful turn of events! :) Great storyte...What a wonderful turn of events! :) Great storytelling.Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-8971454708248667912010-05-26T20:37:20.040+02:002010-05-26T20:37:20.040+02:00Wow! That really surprised me. Enjoyed it immens...Wow! That really surprised me. Enjoyed it immenselypiahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-522483323587587852010-05-26T18:32:35.059+02:002010-05-26T18:32:35.059+02:00Absolutely loved the twist in this.Absolutely loved the twist in this.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8917100109212171464.post-29261045223127099412010-05-26T18:26:02.651+02:002010-05-26T18:26:02.651+02:00what a twist, the secretary was the old girlfriend...what a twist, the secretary was the old girlfriend's sister?! :o wow! beautiful!Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.com