In Memoriam

Accident of time
Our eyes met, Your smile melted
My heart's indifference.

Obscene the heartbreak
caused by one careless moment,
shattering our dreams;

Leaving me alone,
You with a cold brown covering,
Loyal forever.


I can't remember you ever writing poetry for 3WW. This was a great piece. Loved it.


18 November 2009 at 15:40  

Lovely trio of haikus.

19 November 2009 at 03:00  

A sad and lonely tale in this trio of haiku, each one can stand alone or be a well-defined portion of a series. Nice!

20 November 2009 at 00:03  

a beautiful post...simple yet so poignant...

21 November 2009 at 23:00  

Wow this is so moving, I love the darkness and lost love of it.

love, Melanie

23 November 2009 at 18:49  

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