The First Kiss

Lakeside fog lifting,
Bright eyes shining,
Gold glinting from two fingers,
For ever we said and kissed.


Short and VERY sweet. Really lovely.

3 October 2009 at 23:35  

What a lovely poem - short but graphic.

4 October 2009 at 01:26  

So much said in just a few words... I really liked this!

4 October 2009 at 04:35  

Lovely - it would make a beautiful toast for a wedding.

4 October 2009 at 17:41  

Great things come in small packages - your poem is a fine example

5 October 2009 at 02:48  

This is a superb delivery of the feelings a first kiss provides.

7 October 2009 at 21:31  

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