Lakeside fog lifting,
Bright eyes shining,
Gold glinting from two fingers,
For ever we said and kissed.
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Lakeside fog lifting,
Bright eyes shining,
Gold glinting from two fingers,
For ever we said and kissed.
Labels: Sunday Scribblings
keiths ramblings said...
Short and VERY sweet. Really lovely.
3 October 2009 at 23:35
Granny Smith said...
What a lovely poem - short but graphic.
4 October 2009 at 01:26
Anonymous said...
So much said in just a few words... I really liked this!
4 October 2009 at 04:35
Dee Martin said...
Lovely - it would make a beautiful toast for a wedding.
4 October 2009 at 17:41
Anonymous said...
Great things come in small packages - your poem is a fine example
5 October 2009 at 02:48
Heliotropism said...
This is a superb delivery of the feelings a first kiss provides.
7 October 2009 at 21:31